Tuesday, July 25, 2017

Point of View (And Why It Matters) - Third Person Omniscient


I don't usually use this POV myself, but I do believe it has its place in the grand scheme of storytelling. I usually write first person for short stories, but use third person limited for longer works. It just seems to flow better, and I like that freedom that comes with that degree of removal from the character. There are two versions of third person POV: third person limited and third person omniscient. Well, actually I think there are more than that, but I'm only going to discuss those two in my posts. So, let's get started with omniscient.

Third Person Omniscient

A lot of "modern" writers decry this POV. They call it head-hopping, lazy, and impossible to follow. But it does have its uses, and many classic authors have used this POV to great effect. Oh, and for all those people who think this POV is no longer relevant to modern storytelling? Every movie you've ever watched is created using third person omniscient---which means the books those screenplays were adapted from had to be converted to third person omniscient before production could begin. Keep that in mind, next time you find yourself haughtily decrying someone else for "head-hopping." Knowing how to do it properly might just help you turn your book into a blockbuster movie.



How It Works - "He feels shame. She feels vindicated. They both travel into the sunset, while the bad guy rails against his crushing defeat."

Third person omniscient works exactly as it sounds - the author, and therefore the reader, know everything that goes on in every character's head, in every instance in the book. Nothing is hidden unless the author wants it to be. Unlike first person, where the POV character must be present to "witness" an event, the author can jump around and tell the reader about events that take place without the main character's knowledge. You can do this with third person limited, too, but it takes a light touch. We'll get into that later. For now, just assume that an author writing in third person omniscient is trying to play god. The reader, by proxy, knows all and sees all. This allows you to set up scenes with zero need for speculation---even if the main characters are unaware of the antagonist's actions or motivations, the reader can be made aware. All of which can lead to some serious tension on the part of the reader, because they will always "know" when the main character is about to make a big mistake.

Example - I'm not good at this type of POV, so I'm not going to provide a personal example. However, you can read one of the Masters of this POV any time you want. Just pick up Raymond E. Feist's Magician series (Riftwar Saga.) Or, if you're looking for a more modern author to emulate, you can pick up Stan Nicholl's Orcs series. Both are written in third person omniscient, and both are spectacular.

The Good - Third person omniscient has fewer "rules" than other POVs. You don't have to restrict your descriptions based on the perception of a single character, which means you can showcase both sides of an argument, including internal motivations, without needing to break up a scene. This helps a lot with epic novel formats, because you can have lots of characters in the same scene and provide in-depth character studies all at the same time. Fight scenes are great in third person omniscient. If you've got a huge army fighting against a terrible foe, you can jump from battle to battle, soldier to soldier, without losing the underlying drama of the overall fight. So, if you're planning a story with a large cast of characters, multiple locations, and sweeping action scenes, third person omniscient might just be the way to go.

The Bad - As mentioned previously, this POV has somewhat gone out of style in recent years. Lots of publishers will refuse any novel that has "head-hopping" in it. It can be seen as too broad for most readers, because it can give away too much information too soon. It can also feel very jerky and forced when scenes jump around between different characters. It's also a lot harder to "surprise" the reader with a third person omniscient story. When the reader knows the emotional state and motivation of every single character in the book, a lot of times so-called plot twists are telegraphed well ahead of the actual event. Which means you end up with a lot of readers saying, "I saw that coming a mile away." So if you're writing a mystery novel, you probably don't want to use third person omniscient. You could give away your bad guy long before the "clues" point him out.

Reasons to Use Third Person Omniscient

This is just my personal opinion, but third person omniscient works great for sci-fi and military novels. With sci-fi, it helps to be able to showcase a lot of information in interesting ways. If you can have more than one character "thinking" at a time, you can go over scientific data and discoveries through multiple perspectives, which can make it feel more realistic. It works for military novels, especially war novels, because you can showcase high-octane battle scenes from a lot of different perspectives without losing the drama. I already said that, but it bears repeating. The worst thing you can do in a huge, multi-level battle scene is to shrink it down to a single perspective. It's much more fun and engaging when you get to see lots of different soldiers and still "feel" what they feel during the fight. It can also work really well for government conspiracy novels, especially if you have a lot of different people involved in the conspiracy. Getting the perspective of several different Senators, Congressmen, White House officials, Army Generals, and reporters can add depth and heft to your story. It can also lead to a lot of yelling on the part of the reader...especially if the reader "knows" the Senator is about to make a huge mistake because the reader already saw the back-room deal that's about to undercut the Senator's plans. Again, all of this can be done with third person limited, too, but for the sake of this argument I'll just say that omniscient allows for a lot more freedom to expand your story's horizons.

Reasons NOT to Use Third Person Omniscient

For all the freedom it gives you, this POV can feel pretty restrictive. If you set up a story that requires multitudinous perspectives, you run the risk of "forgetting" to provide a particular angle. For example, if you start out with seven characters and take pains to showcase the "inner workings" of each characters' mind, your reader will expect you to maintain that level of intimacy for all seven characters. So if your story ends up focusing on only three of those characters, the reader can feel overburdened by the extra perspectives. Or, you could suddenly forget to provide the perspective from all seven characters, thereby making the reader feel as if you've "messed up" while telling the story. There's nothing worse than dropping a plot thread, and it's very, very easy to do in third person omniscient. You have to end as you began, which means you better have comprehensive character studies for each and every person in your story. If you forget, or decide to stop showcasing a character in the middle of the story, you run the risk of knocking the reader right out of the book. And, as previously stated, it's a lot harder to surprise your reader when they already know everything there is to know. You better hope your plot twists aren't dependent on naivete or lack of attention, because your reader will be aware of said naivete and lack of attention long before the twist comes to light.

Moral of the story: use this POV only if you know you can pull it off. It's not a scapegoat for lazy storytelling. It's supposed to be used for epic, intricate, multi-layered plot purposes. NOT because you just don't feel like restricting your descriptions to the perceptions of a single character at a time.

Wednesday, July 19, 2017

Point Of View (And Why It Matters) - First Person



This post was sparked by a conversation I had with a Facebook friend. He's writing a sci-fi novel, and he's purposefully using third person omniscient for his POV. He made a very good case for why he's choosing to use that method, and it got me thinking. A lot of newbie authors don't really know why they're choosing a particular POV. They choose it based on gut instinct, or because they don't know how to write any other POV, or because they think their story "requires" a certain POV. But like most storytelling tools, there is a method to the madness of POV. Or at least, there should be.

So, let's go through the different types of POV, why they're good, why they're bad, and why you should consider those things before choosing which one to use for your story.

First Person - "I'm telling you my story. Here's what happened." 

First person is telling a story from an entirely personalized point of view. Observations and actions are entirely dependent on the perception and knowledge of an individual. There's both good and bad limitations on this type of POV.

Good News - Surprises, twists, and misconceptions are a lot easier to get away with in this type of storytelling. If the narrator is surprised, the reader will be surprised. If the narrator has formed an opinion about something, the reader will form the same opinion---which means the reader will be more likely to be surprised when it turns out to be wrong. Which means you can mislead the reader from the moment the narrator opens his/her mouth.

Why is that a good thing? Simple: stories are more entertaining when there's a surprise in the box.

Example: Say you're writing about a soldier who's been tasked with monitoring a border between two nations. Say the nations are on the edge of war. Your soldier is told that a secret spy mission has just been sent into the enemy's territory to find out if an attack is imminent. He's supposed to look out for a signal from the spy team. If he sees a red balloon rising from the other side of the wall, he's to tell his president to attack the enemy. If he sees a blue balloon, he's supposed to tell the president to pursue a course of peace. It's a big responsibility, but he feels he's up to the task. So he watches the border, agonizing about the consequences of war between two nations, and contemplating the consequences of starting a war based on a red balloon sighting. He waits, and waits, and waits. Finally, a balloon goes up. He goes to his president and declares the war is begun.

After the first attack, the narrator gets arrested for treason. The spy master demands to know why he told the president to attack. Your guy is outraged---after all, he saw the balloon go up. The spy master says, "It was a blue balloon! Blue means peace, not war!"

At which point your narrator realizes something for the very first time---he's colorblind. He started a war because he couldn't tell the color of the balloon.

That's how you get away with twists in first person. If the narrator doesn't realize something, the reader won't, either.

Bad News - First person is extremely limiting. You can only talk about the things the narrator actually knows. If you slip up and give the narrator more information than he/she should reasonably know, you'll break the fourth wall and ruin the whole thing for the reader. You're also limited by the fact that only one character gets to tell the story. Well, you can write a story with more than one first person narrator, but you have to do it very, very carefully. You can only do it through chapter breaks; it makes no sense to have a mid-chapter break that switches from one person to the next, since both parts of the chapter will be using "I" and therefore the narrator's identity won't be readily apparent.

Reasons to Use First Person POV

You get to tell an extremely personal story when you use first person. The emotional highs and lows are both immediate and poignant, which means you get to engage your reader on a visceral level. Whether you write in present tense or past tense, your narrator will come across as personable and realistic even in fictional circumstances. The narrator's perceptions, opinions, and limited experience provide a rich tapestry on which to weave your story. First person stories provide lots of opportunities for character studies, which means you don't have to try to break the mold with your plot. It's all about the character and how he grows and changes, rather than the journey itself.

Reasons NOT to Use First Person


As previously stated, first person is limiting. If you know how to take advantage of those limitations, you can tell a story with lots of surprising twists. If you fail to realize those limitations, you end up with an improbable tale of an omniscient individual who seems to have mind reading powers. I suppose you can always write a first person story about a mind-reader, but there's only so many times you can get away with that. You have to treat your narrator as if he's a witness in a murder trial; he can only testify to what he actually witnessed. If he starts talking about events he didn't personally see happen, you start asking your reader to suspend disbelief in a way that doesn't feel natural---and therefore won't be engaging. You can get around this limitation by having another character come in to tell the narrator about an event, but again, you have to do it carefully. If your entire story is about your narrator regurgitating events that other people are telling him about, you probably shouldn't be writing in first person.

Monday, July 17, 2017

Places to Advertise Your Book





 Everyone asks for help with advertising. I wasn't going to post anything about this, but I'm getting overwhelmed with requests. So, here's my list of advertising opportunities. Nothing is guaranteed---you may or may not get good results. I will update this list as I expand my own advertising efforts.

My Favorite Review Sites (Paid Editorial)

 OnlineBookClub.org
Rather expensive, but worth it if you get a 4 Star review. Scott Hughes is an active site owner, and he responds to all author requests. He offers lots of different services, including Book of The Day and Book of the Month. Honestly, most of what he offers is too expensive for self-published authors. But, if you've got the cash, it's definitely worth it.

This is my review from OnlineBookClub.org:
https://forums.onlinebookclub.org/viewtopic.php?f=21&t=43087




Book Viral Reviews
There are different options for review services. A little expensive, but absolutely worth it. A good review on Book Viral will give you tons and tons of reviewer quotes.

This is my review on Book Viral: http://www.bookviral.com/a-shift-toward-prey/4593803464



Reader's Favorite Book Reviews & Awards
Another expensive service. However, a perfect 5-Star review automatically enters you in their annual contest. A win in this contest can lead to other indie author awards. Plus you get an editorial review to use for promotions. Worth the money.

This is my review on Reader's Favorite:
https://readersfavorite.com/book-review/a-shift-toward-prey





Paid Promo Services

Bookgrabbr 6ab0d182c8b63bfb3c472d83628b910ca00dd82a0370a7b51382edc1bda8bf6ahttps://bookgrabbr.com/

I just found this advertising service and I'm trying it out. I'll let y'all know if it works well or turns into a money dump. Definitely worth checking out.


Booklife - Publisher's Weekly Indie Author Service

Worth it simply because you get to say you were featured in Publisher's Weekly. Promo on their site and in the magazine. Free review that could also get you entered in their yearly contest.

Book Buzzr

This one is great for Twitter promotions. Simple monthly fee, and you get daily posts to tons of followers across several Twitter accounts. I went from zero followers to over 2000 in about a month. So it's worth it to get your brand out there. Name recognition is everything in this business.
http://www.bookbuzzr.com/

Story Cartel

I haven't tried this one personally, but it looks like a good service.
https://storycartel.com/about






WhizzBuzz

Awesome listing service. One fee, once per year. Worth every penny.
https://www.whizbuzzbooks.com/

 

 

Authors Talk About It

Get a featured interview and enter their annual contest. 
http://authorstalkaboutit.com/get-featured-author-interview/?mc_cid=168350b813&mc_eid=9e91aa9020

 

Interviews, Podcasts, and Other Opportunities 

 APNTV

I landed an interview on this network! Premiering September 27, 2017
http://www.apntvmedia.com/tvshow



http://www.apntvmedia.com/gazette

 

The Author Show.com

Great opportunity to be interviewed on a podcast.
http://wnbnetworkwest.com/

 

Blog and Review Services (Free for the most part)


The Blogger Girls

One of my favorite review services. Completely free. They don't always accept books for reviews, so make sure you send your request to the correct reviewer. Be extremely sweet and professional, and make sure you ASK for a review, rather than demanding one.

 https://thebloggergirls.com/

 

 

Other Websites with Lists of Promo Services

These websites have tons and tons of suggestions. Easier to just go there :)

http://www.indiesunlimited.com/book-promo-sites/
http://www.digitalpubbing.com/7-strategies-and-94-tools-to-help-indie-authors-find-readers-and-reviewers/
https://kindlepreneur.com/list-sites-promote-free-amazon-books/
https://www.bookworks.com/2015/10/great-sites-that-offer-indie-book-reviews/
http://www.selfpublishingx.com/list-sites-promote-free-amazon-books/
https://angiesdiary.com/featured/top-10-free-book-promotion-sites/
https://savvybookwriters.wordpress.com/2012/03/11/18-top-websites-to-promote-your-book-for-free/
http://blog.booksontheknob.org/subscribe-about-contact/authors-read-this



Award Contests You Should Enter

Literary Classics Book Awards

http://www.clcawards.org/Index.html
 AWESOME Awards! I won a Gold Award for Fantasy in the College age division. Winning this award launched my book into the spotlight, and I landed several interviews on TV and podcasts. Absolutely worth the money. The awards ceremony is held in conjunction with the Great American Book Festival.



 Indie Book Awards

I entered the contest. I can't say if it's worth it just yet. Check back later for info!

 http://www.indiebookawards.com/


https://www.thekindlebookreview.net/2017-kindle-book-awards/
http://www.usabooknews.com/2017bestbookawards.html
http://bestindiebookaward.com/live/entry-form/
https://www.chantireviews.com/services/#!/Fantasy-Writing-Contests-Sword-&-Sorcery-Fiction-Chanticleer-Book-Reviews/p/57162380/category=5193080